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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2019 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow, I think the next chapter might be the best one yet, because this might be one of the best setups I have seen on this site.

Thank you Krystal for being lazy and forgetting about Steve. Hopefully she doesn’t say anything to her mom, Missy, because I like the thought of Steve in the hands of Mandy.

Wow! Mandy is actually thinking about using Steve without knowing it is him. One good thing about Krystal is that she got Mandy in the mood. Mandy is horny and this is new, so I wonder how she is when she is turned on. Mandy has made every girl jealous because she was the one to marry Steve. So Steve might actually be turned on here. I bet he is scared and excited at the same time. I feel the same way thinking about it.

What happens when your giantess wife accidentally mistakes you for a sex toy? Not only that, but you are tied up and gagged with no way to tell her that it’s you. Fate is basically give a reward and punishment at the same time. So Steve is literally at the hands of his own sexy wife. He is very familiar with this pussy for the years that this couple has had sex, but now he is about to experience her pussy from a whole new perspective. This is very erotic and sensual.

I can only imagine Steve’s perspective during this whole situation. He slides out of Krystal and he is struggling to escape while drenched in her juices. Then Krystal leaves and he feels another woman enter the bed. He knows it’s his wife because she told Krystal to leave, but his wife doesn’t know that he is stuck on the bed. Suddenly, he sees her delicate hand reach over and grab him. He believes he is saved, but then she never bothers to look closely at him. Then, she takes him to the bathroom and cleans him up, giving Steve hope that she will eventually notice him. She doesn’t. Instead she takes him back to her room and leaves him on the table next to her bed with a clear view of her while she gets back into bed. Steve is confused and wonders what is going on. He watches Mandy take her phone in one hand and then begins playing with herself with the other. Steve is surprised and is also getting turned on. “Is she watching porn?” Steve thought, a little curious now as he watched his wife. She began typing and he saw her getting replies, the whole time her hand never left her pussy. Whoever she was talking to was turning her on and this made Steve mad. Every woman wants to use him as a sex toy and then his wife seems to have already forgotten him. Steve just wanted to shout and scream, but he was left helpless and forced to watch as his own wife continued to pleasure herself.

Man, I love writing fanfiction. I think Steve’s perspective in addition to Mandy’s might be pretty hot also. I could only wonder what happens next chapter.

Then we have Jess continuing what she does best. Making men serve her. Or I should say man and boy, because Chad is still a boy being taught female anatomy from a very sexy teacher we have as Jess. First he learned about a relationship with Casey, then Jess taught him how to cheat on her, then she taught him how it feels to be shrunk, then used as a sex toy, then all about her vagina and now all the way in her cervix. Chad is living the life.

I love how Casey asked Jess if Chad was still inside Jess and for how long. That’s kinda funny. He has been inside Jess’s pussy for a very long time and I love how she just keeps him inside her.

What I liked about Krystal was how she tied up Steve. I think it would be great if more of these giantess decided to tied up their little shrunken toys. Maybe Jess could squeeze Chad out, then explain how he is going to be stuck in her pussy forever as she is tying him up. Chad squirms and protests, but Jess gags him also. Jess then dangles the helpless Chad over her pussy, already opening itself up sensing that it’s favorite meal is returning. Chad watches in terror as her pussy opens up and he sees the dark hole that he is all too familiar with. Jess releases her grip and Chad slips right in between her pussy lips which close behind him, sealing him inside. Chad struggles even more knowing he can’t use his arms and legs like he used to. He squirms like a worm, giving Jess many delightful sensations. Jess doesn’t think she will ever let him out.

Then there was the scene where Casey and Mandy were texting each other. I’m not sure what I think of it. I think strategically, if Casey and Jess know that Mandy likes Jax, then they won’t think that Mandy has Steve. I kind of like that Steve is now Mandy’s little secret. If Mandy plays it off that she likes Jax, then no one will suspect her of having Steve.

I do like how Casey is posing as Jax. Girls know what girls like to hear so it must feel good for Casey to know how easy it is to manipulate her. I wonder if Casey is going to take a pic of Jax licking her out and send it. That would anger Mandy, but maybe it might turn on Mandy seeing a man licking a woman like that. After all, Jax has a fiancé, so maybe Mandy might get turned on to see Jax with another woman which she can easily put herself in Casey’s perspective. Mandy doesn’t seem to be so innocent after all, lusting after a man with a fiancé. Who knows, maybe Mandy has a kinky side?

After reading this chapter, I can’t tell which tiny is having the better time. Chad, being a 24/7 pussy prisoner for Jess, or Steve who has been in every woman’s pussy including the bad ones like Krystal, but now has a chance with his own wife. Hard to choose.

However, I will say that the Mandy/Steve dynamic might the most exciting thing now compared to the Jess/Chad group. Mostly because that Steve is immobile and gagged and his wife is about to use him as a sex toy without her knowing. That might be one of the sexiest situations I can think of. Man, imagine if Mandy leaves Steve stuck inside her while he is all tied up. The she goes to work and goes to sleep with him still inside. It might be overkill to have 2 giantess’s keep their toys inside their pussies but that’s what I like. Now I think Jess needs to spice it up with Sam getting involved or possibly getting Chad all tied up.

Things are looking great, and I absolutely love this chapter! I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Wow that would have to be the best review I’ve ever received, Thank You So Much for liking my story, I’ve listened to your feedback and I’m trying to see what I can fit into my story without getting to far from my own personal preferences, I only started writing because there were no new stories that appealed to me, so instead of waiting for that off chance that maybe someone would write a story I liked, I decided I’d start to write my own stories with the content that I enjoy, I can’t match the length of your review but I hope you keep enjoying what I write, your feedback has given me a few ideas when my mind has gone blank, I try to keep it interesting by using different words to describe objects and scenarios, so I hope that is showing through, I know my grammar is still not the best, but I’m trying my hardest to make my stories easier to read so they become more enjoyable to all my readers, I hope I can keep this story going and keep the interest of my readers at the same time, so let’s see how the next chapter goes, thanks again for reading and thank you so much for your reviews and input, like I said I enjoy reading your reviews and I like to know how I’m doing. One other thing, have you read my story ‘Travelling Home’ if so what are your thoughts, it was a quick little story that I had in my head and had to write before I forgot it, let me know what your thoughts are on it. Once again Thank You

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