[Report This]Date: August 18 2019 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
The Mandy-Steve scene was perfect! The only one detail that I would’ve changed was having Steve’s upper body pressed against her vagina rather than her asshole.
Otherwise it was amazing and erotic! I love how you included both of their perspectives to see how they treated the scene differently. Mandy sees Steve as a sex toy and Steve sees his wife as this giantess determining his fate.
The hottest part was easily having Mandy pull up her sexy panties with a tied up Steve riding passenger. I could only imagine Steve’s face as he tries to escape his panty prison but then Mandy locks him up and keeps him secure.
I can see Mandy going to work with Steve while Jess goes to work with Chad. This workplace just got interesting. Everyone will be horny. Haha!
One thing I am curious about is that shouldn’t Mandy realize Steve is in her panties? I mean, she should feel something. Maybe she takes a look and just thinks it’s a dildo, but imagine she discovers Steve like this: all tied up and gagged stuck in her own panties while she wears him to work all day long. She might feel sorry for Steve but also turned on by then.
This was easily my favorite chapter since I’m so happy Mandy has her own toy and it’s her own husband at her mercy. I never thought of Mandy as the naughty type, but this chapter changed my perception of her and I love it. Mandy is a naughty lady and I like it.
Wow! I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Anyway, I read “Traveling home” and I liked it. To me, it’s very similar to this one, especially since it’s about a guy named Steve. Lol. In addition, I like how the guys seem to have multiple women after them. There was that one scene where this random lady was asking Steve why is he with her and he ultimately said that she was his wife. There’s some twistedness that I find very entertaining, and that scene shows how Steve has changed. This story, however, Steve is passed along faster than a hot potato which makes me like this story much more. Also, the whole Chad/Jess situation is something that I wished more stories had. To top it off, the Mandy/Steve situation these last 2 chapters just makes this story so much better!
Author's Response: Thanks again, I’m glad you enjoyed that chapter, I really enjoyed writing it, there is more to come in the Steve/Mandy scenario, I just wanted to break it up a bit so you didn’t get it all at once and I had to get back to the other characters before I forgot what they were doing, But I’ll hey come back in the next chapter, i feel like I need to keep the story flowing for everyone in it and it may annoy some people because I’m jumping from one scenario to another, but I like to make sure I keep all my characters up to speed & in the same time zone if that makes sense, i’d Love to tell you what’s coming up but I don’t want to spoil it for you, you’ll just have to wait till I post it to see who’s in the next chapter.
Also thanks for reading “travelling home” & giving me your thoughts, I wouldn’t mind that happening to me one day, hopefully when I finish this story I can get back on to “the wrong spell” & try & finish that one off before I start any more.
Once again thank you for your response and I’m so glad your enjoying my stories.