[Report This]Date: August 29 2019 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 35
So, I’m wondering about this deal now. Jess is probably going to exchange Chad for Steve. She did mention that Chad will end up with someone more worse than her, so Missy or Krystal seem to be the likely options now. Actually, I think this chapter just confirmed that.
Mandy....wow, I facepalmed just reading about her just letting Steve go like that. Like, she enjoyed the “dildo” so much that she just left it like that? She acted like Krystal’s dildo was something very special so I found it odd that she just gave it up easily. Also, getting it covering it poop doesn’t make a special disloyal worthless now. I’ve heard of people dig through poop to retrieve their cell phones back.
I was kinda hoping Jess trade with Mandy or something, dildo for dildo. That way we could see Mandy literally hand Steve over. Jess could say that Chad is a super dildo or dildo or something.
I did enjoy reading about Mandy telling Jess about how she used Steve. It was basically a recap of my favorite events the last few chapters. Then I liked how Jess was using Chad while she listened.
So now Jax and Mandy are going to be together but risk getting caught on camera by Jess. Maybe Jax will convince Mandy to help him or something. If he truly cares for his wife and baby, he would try to get out of this situation. Jax even knows about the shrunken guys, so maybe he might reveal something to Mandy for a plot twist. I don’t think Mandy will abuse Steve like Jess and Casey did, but I can see her just having Jax just fuck her a lot.
It would be cool to have Jess hold up a gagged Steve in view of Jax fucking Mandy. That sounds kinda hot to me. Hopefully Missy gives up Steve fast so we could get that scene soon.
So Jess gets to hold onto Chad for another day. If I was Chad, I would lick Jess to the center of her vagina. How many licks does it take to get to ...you get the idea. Haha. I imagine Jess will have her way with Chad in an unforgettable way.
Soon, Missy will have Chad. Missy will most likely just keep Chad in her panties. I never saw her as the creative type, so I doubt she would do anything to impress me. However, I know how forceful she is about keeping a sex toy down there so Chad may feel more like a prisoner with Missy than Jess.
Then there is still Sam. Where is he? I forgot about him. Is he with his wife? At Jess’s house? I forgot. I think Jess has to shrink him soon. I think Sam would be perfect for Missy. Likewise, Chad could have a go with Mandy, and Steve could return to Jess again.
Then there is Jax. Is he ever going to be shrunk, or is he going to be that guy with the big dick? Or is that Sam? One of them has to shrink. I feel like there is a lack of sex toys at the moment.
It’s funny because for most stories, I prefer there to be only 1 tiny guy, but with all these sexy ladies, I kinda want more so they all can have some fun. Imagine a world where every guy got shrunk and women could play Pokémon and collect all the guys. They could trade, share and experiment on ways to use them.
At first I enjoyed just having a shrunk Steve, but I actually like how this story just blossomed into all the guys at the mercy of these ladies.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Firstly I have to apologise for the late reply, my life became a bit busy but I’m back on track.
I really like your idea of the Pokémon game for women, where every guy shrunk and all the women would run around collecting them & trading us, you’d have no idea who you would end up with & you would have no choice either, sounds great, someone should write a story about that lol
While I’ve been busy I’ve had a bit of time to think about my story and where it might lead, I’ve got a few ideas that I might implement into the plot and see where it goes, but your right about needing more toys, I’m sure the women that are involved in this little secret want more play time, there seems to be a couple of naughty ladies missing out, so i’ll see what I can come up with in the next chapter, I know where I want to go with this story now, I just have to get there, so stay tuned, keep enjoying & i’ll keep writing.
Thank again as always, I love your feedback & your enthusiasm in my writing, enjoy