[Report This]Date: September 06 2019 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, Missy almost revealed Steve to Mandy. Good choice of words. You know she really wanted to say Steve was inside her vagina right in front of Mandy. Haha.
While this was mostly a Missy chapter, it was quite entertaining. I see that you also found a new guy called Gus to be used as a tiny. I think he is perfect for Missy. I would rather have Gus be in Missy’s hands than Chad. Chad just feels like he belongs with Jess. I don’t know why. It just feels right that he can’t ever escape her. To see Chad with Missy would feel weird, but that’s just my opinion. The only other woman that I think I could see Chad with is Mandy, because I kind of like her being the unaware giantess and maybe Chad is trying to get her attention the whole time, but also turned on by Mandy. Otherwise, Chad is perfect for Jess. The way you described Chad’s life that other chapter felt as if he now has a special marriage with Jess’s pussy. (And Chads dad could put a ring on it. Get it? Hehe).
Wow, that sales clerk was rude, but I think she could have been meaner. She said a few mean comments, but part of me feels that Missy may have heard similar comments from strange women before. I think the sales woman should say something completely offensive so we feel justified when Missy is using Gus. So far, that sales lady just seems like she is having a bad day after her sister stole her husband and is now putting that anger on Missy. Maybe Missy returns and the sales lady pushes Missy to the ground, or Missy buys a drink and the sales lady spills it. (I think the sales lady needs a name. Lol.) Another scene that could happen is Missy already has Gus halfway up her pussy and she is walking around the mall with him stowed in her snatch. Then the sales lady looks to see if no one is around and kicks Missy in the groin, sending Gus shooting deep inside Missy’s pussy. The sales lady wants to see Missy in pain, but Missy just moans and has an orgasm right there. The sales lady would have no idea that she just sent her boyfriend deep inside Missy’s pussy. Just a thought.
I like the creativity of Missy knocking Gus unconscious and taking pics. Then of course when she starts grinding her pussy on his face was hot. I can’t believe she just let Steve’s legs dangle that entire scene and had Gus look at that. It’s like foreshadowing and I like that. Looks like Gus’s fate has been decided.
Hmm. So if Missy gets Gus, where does Steve go? Back to Jess? So I wonder who gets Chad? Oh! Maybe Jess gets Chad back after Missy says that she already found a man. Then Jess hands Steve back to her daughter. Meanwhile, Chad is still in Jess’s panties, right? That’s so hot! His family is looking for him and Jess just turned Chad into a 24/7 sex toy for her. He has seen more pussy than the sun this past week. That’s awesome.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you again, I really enjoyed writing this chapter, you told me that Missy wasn’t as creative as Jess, so I thought I’d give this chapter to her and try and change your mind, I think by the sounds of it I accomplished just that.
I have a clear direction where I want to go with this story and I know that some parts of it may disappoint you, but I’m hoping that when I finish each chapter and I start heading in the direction of where I want to go you will really enjoy reading it and you’ll look past the disappointment of where you’d like to see this story go, I’ll just keep writing and posting each chapter and wait for your response and feedback and see how I go, as long as I keep you intrigued enough so you continue reading, I enjoy your responses and your feedback and I take a lot of it on board so you keep enjoying reading and I thank you for enjoying my story.
But as I always say it would be really good to have other people’s views on my story, more feedback and suggestions gives me more ideas.
I hope you enjoy the next chapter and that goes for everyone reading this response and thank you for reading.