[Report This]Date: September 11 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 37
Hmm. I like Jess’s plan, but there is one loophole, how would they know that Jax and Mandy would show up in his bedroom? It felt like Mandy wanted Jax more than Jax wanted Mandy so I was actually led to believe that they would fuck at Mandy’s house. Imagine that plot twist. No one shows up at Jax’s place and Jess misses her recording.
If Jess told Jax to bring Mandy to his place, wouldn’t he ask why? Ok, he might not, but who knows if Jax’s neighbors and stuff might see him with another woman. For Mandy’s neighbors it’s alright since people know her husband is gone.
I just had to point that out because I was imagining them fucking on Mandy’s bed, the same bed that Steve fucked Mandy for all these years, and recently when she used Steve as her own sex toy. I thought Jess was going to use that to make it more humiliating.
Speaking of Steve, it’s kind of weird to see him just accept being Jess’s toy. I always liked the rebel in Steve and how he fought back. I think the “truth” of Mandy starting all this really broke him down. Seems like it’s all downhill for Steve. Will he get a happy ending by reuniting with his wife and she notices him? I’m not sure if that’s your style since you and I both love it when Steve is with other women.
So Steve is back with Jess. Back where it all started. I’m so used to Chad being with Jess, that it feels kinda off for me, haha. I mean, I like Jess having Steve, but Chad just seems like better pair right now.
I like how you tried to make Chad seem like the perfect candidate for Missy. It’s funny because I think the last chapter I was trying to explain how Chad was perfect for Jess because of Jess’s daughter and how Jess got Chad’s mom and dad involved. So much devolved around Chad and Jess and now there’s this new story with Missy and Chad and while yes, they have a connection. I doubt it will be as strong as what Jess had with Chad.
Wait, so Missy is going to have 2 toys? Chad and Gus? I agree Gus is perfect for Missy, but I’m not sure about Chad. Maybe Missy will use Gus and teach Chad about worship and return Chad later. It’s hard for me to picture Chad with Missy for the long run. I’m already wondering who gets Chad next. Lol.
So Sam is going to be shrunk soon. Who gets Sam? Jess has Steve and I can’t tell if she likes Sam or Steve more. I was hoping Jess would shrink Sam and then she would pull Chad out of her pussy or something and force Sam to watch it.
Maybe Missy could do that since she has Chad now. But then Missy would have Chad, Sam and Gus. Hmm.
Then we still got Jax. Surely something will happen that will cause him to get shrunk. Jax is the only guy besides Gus that is aware of these shrunken guys. Maybe, he becomes a risk, I’m not sure. Or maybe he actually likes Mandy which makes Jess and Missy mad and they shrink him.
Hmm. Then Jax meets Steve and they fight. However, Jess records it and sends it to Mandy. Mandy watches it confused and in awe that she can see her husband before he “left” her. She thinks both guys are normal sized because when they fight, they are equal in size and there is nothing to compare their size with. (Ok, don’t add this part to the story, it was random. Haha.)
Yeah, overall, I wonder how long Chad will be with Missy. (Hopefully not too long, hehe.) and also how long will Jess hang onto Steve while she has to get Sam and help Missy get Gus.
Great chapter, I no longer wish to be in Chad’s position, haha. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: G’day
Bit of a mixed review but there haha, but I expected it, I did warn you that some parts may disappoint you, but I’m trying to make it exciting and interesting, I don’t want my story to be predictable, I like throwing twists in to keep you intrigued.
When it comes to Mandy and Jax being at his house, Well Jess did arrange Jax to take her back there, she wanted Jax to cheat with another woman in his bed, so if she was ever to show his fiancée it would hurt that little bit more, also Krystal and Mandy’s kids were at her house so that would’ve been a bit awkward, just wanted to clear up the thoughts I had in my head, but now that I think about it, it would’ve hurt Steve more if she bedded Jax in her bed while the kids were home, but she wouldn’t have been able to be so loud haha.
As for Steve he still has some fight in him, he hates being an arse toy and I think he will still protest about going in Jess’s arse when she wants to use him in that way, Jess will surely punish him for breaking his promise.
As for Missy and Chad, I loved the idea of Missy getting her hands on the son of the two people who betrayed her, their son is now her dirty little fuck toy and Sam will be in for a treat in the upcoming chapters, it also looks like Missy is going to end up with two toys, she’s a whole lota woman and she might just need the extra toy to keep her satisfied.
Jess is going to toy with Sam for a bit but it looks like he will be eventually shrunk down to size, but Sam is an arrogant arse hole and neither Missy or Jess really want him, so we’ll just have to see who ends up with him, I’m hoping to bring a few more characters into the story, I’m still in the process of who I can add and how they will fit, but I’m sure i’ll come up with something, in the meantime I hope you keep enjoying my story and i’ll chat with you after the next chapter.
Thanks again for the feedback, always appreciate.