[Report This]Date: November 30 2018 1:15 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Y'all know this is a fetish story, right? Lol. I've never seen a story on this site pointed out for "letting the giantess character win" too easily. Like that's what people are getting off on here. That's the point.
[Report This]Date: November 27 2018 6:22 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Excellent!
You've almost humanized Mel more than she maybe ever has before and I look forward to seeing Nicky's march towards potential freedom.
Author's Response:
Again and again, you come in with such a nice review~ As always, I appreciate the review and the loyalty to reading my story! It means a lot!
Date: November 26 2018 10:53 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
@DSG, wish there was a better way of replying to other people lol but no, your reviews are actual constructive criticism. I was mostly talking about 2 others lol
Date: November 26 2018 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Seriously man, keep it up. This is for real next level writing on this site. It’s so freaking terrible reading all these other reviews on this story. It’s one thing to give constructive criticism or voicing an opinion, but it’s another to say blatant exaggerations saying this is “just another vore/crush fest” (when not only has there only been 1 chapter of 13, at that point, that contained vore or crush, but the build up to it and the writing was like no other and the vore/crush wasn’t used just to be there for fetish reasons, it for sure furthered the plot by showing the path of psychopathy/power greed Melanie is furthering down) and straight up bullying you into writing an exact story that they want. Some of em legit are sounding like the girl from Misery tbh lmao. Coming from a guy who practically ONLY likes the vore/crush stuff, I have literally no complaints about the other 12 (now 13) chapters that have none of that stuff because I am just in awe at the pure skill you have at writing compelling storylines in this genre. I can’t wait to see where this story goes!
Author's Response:
Thank thank thank you~ I'm just happy to inspire reactions from people, even negative ones. It means they're invested! They care! With a story like this, I knew from the beginning I'd probably have a few negative reviews, especially as the twists and turns came up. It really only makes me eager to see how they'll respond to future chapters. Thank thank thanks again for another review!