Reviewer: Bluegoose Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2018 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 2: Give Us Some Alone Time

Review, part two  (rhymes)

Again, very good dialogue. Although there are a couple odd points where contractions might have been more appropriate, at first I just thought it was an intentional choice for the father. The descriptions remain vivid, and you're still painting a really clear picture for the reader.

Excited to read more!

Author's Response:

     Oh hello again Bluegoose! Thanks for the part two I really appreciate this. As for my grammatical errors all I can say is I do about 80% of my writing at midnight to 3am! Hahaha.  I will try and be a little more clear in the future!

     Thank you so much for the review! When it comes to grammer and typos I really appreciate it! I go through my stories twice before uploading but upon my third read I notice so much I missed.

     Thanks again. More coming soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Give Us Some Alone Time

This is a great setup to what I hope will be a great story.

First off, I love the description you provided for your story. It was sexy how you described these kids being alone for 2 weeks and how the giantess has a crush on the little guy.

The time of 2 weeks is good becuase it puts pressure on Mimi to have her fun before her parents come back. In addition, while Roy is asleep, it allows Mimi to do things to him while he can't verbally refuse.

I'm really excited to see the relationship between Mimi and Roy to blossom so the appearance of Sarah kind of ruins the moment. Personally, I think she should have been introduced later on in the story when Mimi starts to run out of ideas.

Hopefully Sarah just leaves them alone and is available for future chapters to make things interesting. Also, how did Sarah know that Mimi was staying? She walked through that front door as if it's her own house. Maybe Mimi could hide and perhaps Sarah will think Mimi is on the vacation too.

The "wish" Mimi keeps mentioning seems like she wants to have sex with Roy. She mentioned that she wants to be more than friends so this makes this opportunity much easier for her.

You mentioned that you want to make us imagine their age, but I can't help but think they are around high school age since the parents were asking if Mimi was ok staying home alone. If she was at least a college girl, I wouldn't imagine her parents being that concerned. Then again, they may has asked that because she was "sick", but the way her father asked Mimi seemed like it's the first time Mimi stayed alone at home.

I love the size of 3 inches. Perfect size for a giantess to wrap their hand around him. About the size of a finger.

I love how playful and anxious Mimi is about going to the next level with Roy. I would love to see Mimi hide Roy in the front of her underwear where Roy is awake and he is facing her crotch as her panties are at his back pressing him into her. We already see Mimi hide Roy in her cleavage and I think it's a great step in the right direction.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

     Wow thank you so much for your interest in my story TomSpeedy! I really appreciate this review! I mean it.

     I will take your ideas into consideration! Although I have already pretty much already mapped this out in my head.

   Haha I was trying to keep the age as vague as possible! Haha

Also I love 3 inches! I really think it's the perfect size for stories like this!