Date: November 28 2022 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?
Hey vorepop thanks for the reply. Great to see you are still active. I think Aiata's smell won't suit Mimi, cause mimi is more of a tomboy figure than a hardcore feminine energy. A smell that is slightly sweet but also elegant. the smell should be something that evoke Roy's childhood nostalgia with Mimi and give him flashbacks. Maybe something related to Mimi's favorite food.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2022 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?
Nice chapter. The mouthplay was good but I believe it would have been better if you mentioned how Mimi's mouth smelled like. For me smell is a huge factor. It also help strengthen personality type. Example- Aiata's mouth smelling like candy, Sarah's mouth smelling like Lavender. But sadly Mimi Don't have any unique feature like this. She should have a smell Roy instantly will recognize.
I found those Mimi's shrimp flashback scene very hot. Mimi instinctively being a pred seems like.
And Roy know what vore is! He is one of us seems like.
Author's Response:
Thanks again Bad!
Also I like the description of smell as well, she needs a nice scent. Any ideas?
I was leaning towards sweets like Aiata, but Mimi should be unique.
[Report This]Date: December 03 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?
Nice story; you’ve created a really nice pred-prey-relationship here.
I hope your prey will not be invulnerable because IMHO this really kills any tension – but since you’re the author it’s up to you :)
You still want to continue this story, right?
Author's Response:
Roy will find himself in some more troublesome situations for sure. I plan to see this through. There will be more Roy a d Mimi soon I promise.
As for him being invulnerable, I would have to say no he's not actually invincible. However he has already proven he can handle a lot haha!
[Report This]Date: October 07 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?
Excellent stuff, love the close vore action, and his conflicted acceptance. Hope to see more vore action :)
Author's Response:
Hey thanks Gershwin!
Vore is my favorite category so we will definitely be seeing more of that.
Though I have a "Short" story coming out soon for Halloween season. It's gonna have vore and.. other things. ;D
Date: October 05 2018 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 5: Can I Be Your Shrimp?
Nice chapter. Kind of disappointed this was only a mouth play chapter, not a vore one, but plenty more chances. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Indeed! As you said plenty more chances. They still have 11 more days till the vacation is over.