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Reviewer: Mcpb0 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2019 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 6: Sleeping Slippery Sinkhole

OMG :D Honestly, I thought you'd stopped writing; glad you didn't!

The last chapter is really nice, the indecisiveness; the loss of control when you've gone too far and you can't do anything anymore, the real risk of fatal incidents and the (suggested) complete lack of Mimi's awareness – I mean, if she had swallowed him, the only way to know would be looking in her waste – and then it's too late :P

tl;dr: I love it :)

 



Author's Response: Hey no worries! I will continue to write. XD I haven't given up yet and neither has Roy. His journey's will continue on. Thanks again for reading Mcpb0!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2019 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: Sleeping Slippery Sinkhole

An excellent continuation. I love the sense of being unsure what he wants. It's a familair feeling - the sense of "I want this" but also the "I don't want to die over a fetish". I hope they to get to have some non-fatal fetish fun, but that's just me. I'll enjoy it wherever it goes.



Author's Response:      Thank you so much Gershwin! I am sure a lot of us would struggle with this kind of thing if it were real.       Also thank you so much for the review!

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