[Report This]Date: October 15 2019 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 8: Booby trapped
You’re definitely one of my favourite writers on here now! Your mastery of English, grammar and literary nuances is fabulous. Thank you and I really wish you would write more often, but I know how much life gets in the way. I’ll keep waiting patiently for the next awesome chapter :)
[Report This]Date: September 14 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 8: Booby trapped
Yeah, one chapter... I just get into it too much and keep going. See http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=7157 for example.
Date: September 14 2019 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8: Booby trapped
Nice chapter. I hope Sarah's jaw dropped because of the items on the menu, and that for some reason she can't see Roy. Though I doubt it. At least there is now someone else who might vore him at least. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hah! We will just have to see. I will try and get that next chapter up soon!
Thanks for sticking with it 21!
[Report This]Date: September 14 2019 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: Booby trapped
Nothing wrong with long chapters. You should see some of the 10k monsters I’ve written!
Author's Response:
Wait 10k as in just one chapter?
Either way Gershwin, that's pretty badass!
Date: September 13 2019 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 8: Booby trapped
Holy crapoli, mama mia, it's back
I thought you had abandoned this story but not only is it BACK (and with many updates in short order) but it's showing real signs of improvement too. The dialogue and descriptions are still good and vivid, bonus points for perfectly describing every diner i've ever been to. I like how your main characters, despite already being best-friends, seem to be getting closer, or rather just more comfortable with their current awkward situation. It's always hard in these sorta stories to write the part where the giantess starts to take the situation a little more lightly, once th shock and stuff has worn off, but you've paced it really well. To that end, the part in the previous chapter where it doesn't occur to her that he can't leave the room very fast while tiny is a good subtle way of making it seem like she's treating this more and more like a normal day with her best-friend.
So glad to have you back, there are not nearly enough "childhood best-friend" shrinking stories on this site, and this is definitely one of the best. Can't wait to see where it's goin, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hey again Bluegoose! Thank you again for the review. It's always good to see your comments! I utilize so many tools now. Like word counter and spell check.
I hope I can keep the pace up. More soon! Thanks again.