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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2018 8:45 PM Title: Going Home

These last few chapters have been great. He's been slowly but surely shrinking throughout, and last chapter got some good thigh action in as a sign of things to come. This chapter was something I knew had to happen eventually to bring some conflict into the sotry, especially once we had already met these two grils at the mall earlier. But we get to forget it about for a little while and enjoy the great stuff that's coming up. Can't wait for them to be home and alone!



Author's Response:

It was really nice to do something instead of have her talk about doing something, and that's kind of a breaking chapter where they actually can do stuff.  For the next while it's going to just be the two of them, but if i decide to keep going with at least one day at school (it'll be pushing 30 chapters at that point) they'll definitely come back into the picture to re-inject some conflict, especially if the story seems to be sagging then.

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