Date: February 08 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tremendous. This is what I am talking about. The family fights were done just perfectly and your dialogues are exciting, fresh and funny. Absolutely amazing. I liked especially the sudden vicious carelessness that Rowena's sisters displayed. Another thing is the dialogues. I hate it when stories get too heavy on the feelings and devolve into a depression-quest, and your way to have the figures interact with each other prevents that perfectly. It never gets boring. I'm in awe.
“He has good soul,” she stated. “Is keeper, this one.” - I literally fell off the chair at that one. 10/10
Date: October 01 2007 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story. It's too bad that people had to die but but when you have a piss off giantess people are going to get killed. Like i keep tell people i myself is a big fan of gentle giantess stories. I hate killing stories where people get killed or eaten. I was waiting for this chapter. ANY WAY VERY GOOD STORY!!!
Author's Response: Normally I'm not a fan of violence and death in giantess stories either. But in almost all of my stories, people make miraculous escapes. I thought it was straining credibility so I let Melina go wild. That's just where this one took me. Don't worry, I'll be back to the gentle stuff in no time. Thanks for reading.
Date: September 30 2007 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Bravo, Pixis, bravo. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I think it would have been awesome if, by some freak miracle, NO one was killed. But, thats just my half-ass giantess views. Im a hypocrite, seeing as how Matt nearly kills EVERYONE. By the way... Matthias... Matt... could the bard have any connection to my idiot killer?
Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I would have liked for no one to be killed since I like the gentle stuff but I didn't think that was realistic. When a giantess goes on the rampage, people die. As for Matthias, no connection there. That was a character I came up with a while back and hadn't used in a story yet. Anyhow, thanks again.