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Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Repossesed

really interesting story

Reviewer: Layston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Repossesed

This is a very interesting story so far. She really seems like a gentle giantess, even if she has those sudden urges that she seems to control for now. And I'm very interested to find out what will happen next. Like, will we get to a part where he learns her language? 

Anyways, you wanted to tell you I'm loving the story so far. It's really well written, so I'll be keeping my eyes on it and leaving a review every chance I get.

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Repossesed

You are progressing well, and I only found a couple of gramatical mistakes (use of a wrong gender pronoun, and "(she was already, insentiently, thinking of Lucas as hers)"; I am still trying to figure out the word I underlined? As near as I could guess, you might have meant 'insensitively'... right or wrong?

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