Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2007 7:15 AM Title: An unknown Hell

A well-written yarn, a number of grammatical errors which can be overlooked, but....unfortunately, the story is rather repetitive. The most exciting aspect of men being eaten by giantesses (in my opinion) IS being eaten, and not alway simply swallowed.  The thing I like best is that the 'minimen' be bigger than a fraction of an inch...say 3 inches and more - up to 6" or 15cms. Also, that they are played with prior to their demise - that of being chewed up, masticated very slowly so that the giantess actually 'tastes' her human delicacies.  Hope these comments gives you inspiration.

Author's Response: I can only apologize for my shortcomings in spelling and grammar. I often have little time to write so many of my stories are posted as first drafts without proofreading. I understand such mistakes can take away from a story so I will make an effort to work on this in the future. As to chewing vs. simply swallowing whole, I tend to prefer the latter. You are probably right; the story is repetitive at points and would have benefited from some chomping from a giantess here and there. I will be sure to add such scenes in some of my future stories and additions to current ones. Thank you for the review and the suggestions. I do appreciate them.

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2007 1:27 PM Title: An unknown Hell

Hey, I knew there was  a reason i added your name to my favorite list, man . in fact there are many, and here is just another one! Well done!!

Author's Response: thanks nostormo! you are too kind.