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Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2018 2:49 PM Title: Ch 6: Back at the Apartment (Part 2)

ooooooh. Interesting to see a bigger size in one of your stories! Its a nice change of pace. The tug of war scene was great, and I still love how much Nesi enjoys it all. Gotta love Alena acting as group mom too! Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I also thought that the size change was a nice shake up for things. Glad you liked Nesi's and Allison's little 'struggle'. And yes Alena defintely needs to act as the mature one in these situations. But since her turn will be coming up next chapter, she should be able to show off her playful side too. And I'm glad you liked the chapter in general.

Take care!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2018 2:16 PM Title: Ch 6: Back at the Apartment (Part 2)

Read all six chapters in one sitting! It was that riveting. I can't wait to see where the rest of this goes.*

*So long as it ain't toward the I-word.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Not sure which I-word you mean. Incest? I haven't ever written a sister/family character for this series (or any series really), so that's not happening.

Glad you liked the story.

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