Date: November 28 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Post newer chapters every time
Author's Response:
Well,.. I have a little surprise for everyone come Friday night so look for my latest updated story. :)
That means you too Aliakbar! :)
Date: November 28 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story soo far can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks again Alliabar! :)
Date: November 28 2018 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter chap ,I hope you come up with more of these chapters and make a beautiful novella
Author's Response:
I'm hoping for the same thing Aliakbar!
Thank you! :)
Date: November 25 2018 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story as usual! I read all of your last ones and they were awesome!
I hope you still will update the sitter story, I am dying to find out what happened to the little guy :(
Well rest asured that Sitter for the Summer is not dead. I simply burnt myself out on it a while back. What was it about Sitter that you liked so much? Why was it different from my other stories? If you can answer that one then perhaps my gears on it will begin moving again. The next chapters were going to have little GTS interaction in order to set up the rest of the story.. Do you feel the story could have survived that drought? This was and still is a concern of mine to this day.
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Date: November 25 2018 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've read Dickens and he is indeed lovely .keep up the good work
Author's Response:
I found him to be very tedious!!!!!!
But thank you very much for the support Aliakbar!! :)
Date: November 24 2018 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
The secretary was cool. Loved how she told her to use the stairs. Also enjoyed how she just drops stuff at her. The exterminator is excellent. She just grabs her new assistant and moves along. No more bullhorn or heels. The Giantesses in the new world do not seem to care much about the little's feelings. I am enjoying this very much.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yes their coarseness leaves a lot to be desired doesn't it. But they can be nice too as I'll try to explore as well. Also expect a lot of weird forks in the road. In any case I hope to keep you and the others well entertained as always!
Thank you Diesel!!!!
Date: November 24 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please forgive my review as I am under the weather. The initial set up was quite good. I liked that the English captured their own tiny people and eventually in their greed awakened a sleeping giant or Giantesses as it has become. I also love that the Giantesses keep the Lilliputian's as pets also. They are so small and it's fun to watch them build their tiny world. The englishmen have gotten what they and the rest of the world deserve. Great setup Crocodile.
Enjoyed the first part,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks again for a wonderful review Diesel!
Drink lot's of Sprite soda (for some weird reason it seems to be the only beverage that takes the edge off of the flu), and eat lot's of chicken noodle soup. This has been a particularly nasty Fall with so much rain just like the Summer.
Get well soon as I hope to hear from you as to what you've noticed and liked about my story. I always look forward to what you have to say on matters. ;)
Date: November 24 2018 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sir u have a good imagination .Well propably if jhonathan swift would have thought about it sigh.However please for god's sake never leave this incomplete .it's a beautiful idea and I would love to read many more chapters ahead .thank you soo much sir.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Aliakbar.
This one is going to tax the outer limits of my imagination I'm already coming to realize but it seems exciting to give it a try. Expect the unexpected and a few new inventions that you might not ever have heard of.. That's where a lot of the fun with this story will come from.... I think.
I will be using a lot of Victorian Era colloquialisms so try to parse them as best you can.. When I look at them and their meanings I'm left bewildered on how one saying can translate to a understanding at the other end.. That in itself I think was one of the reasons why Dickens was so hard and challenging to read...
More chapters will indeed be on the way with support like yours and the others who have chimed in thus far!
Thank you once again!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it, fantastic stuff the set up and premise is so great can’t wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
I think the premise is the strength of the story and am glad that you agree.
Thank you Arkcrono. :)
Date: November 23 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is looking really good! Can’t wait to see the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Lord_ne.. I'll see what I can do.