Date: November 24 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved Mrs. Gunkle offering to help and then reaching in and taking what she wanted. She a cool character. Little Karen always answering with Ma'am to show respect. I was brought up myself with answering ladies with Yes Ma'am to show respect. Still do. It's also interesting that little Karen has her own tiny person at home. I liked her giving out a spanking. It immediately shows whose in charge. Unlike most people Karen is kind to her little one. It is funny that some littles would be cruel to their tinies after they are treated poorly by the biggest people. Greatly enjoyed her feeding him the berry and taking it away when she felt that he had enough. Getting some milk is also a treat for him.
Cool chapter and a nice continuing setup of characters.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I figured if a lady held all the cards like Karen does over Edward, a few good swats on the behind would not be beneath her and might actually be done more out of love and keeping him safe, rather than wicked spite.
I'm sure I too would use yes Ma'am if the lady was over 140 feet tall too!
I indeed plan on making Karen and Edward sweet on each other as there must be a nice dynamic to such a brutal story too. Many aweful things are ahead for Karen though, and perhaps the both of them.
I think by obsevering people over the course of my life and how people quickly adopt the temperments and customs of their parennts or managers that people weaker morality people would just naturally fall into the abusive patternes that they have seen and been made privy to.
Thanks again for the great review Diesel!!!!!!
Date: November 24 2018 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
While lots of writers have done their own spin on Gulliver, this is one of the best and most fully realized versions I've read. Great world-building in these chapters. Quite a strange dynamic that humans can hold jobs and make minimum wage but can also be eaten without any consequences. Sort of a twisted take on the prejudices and inequality of our own world.
Author's Response:
That's exactly what it is.. Borrowing from slavery lore that I'm acquainted with on that account. Putting vore into a story and making it plausible is often times much more difficult than most vore fans realize. For example, most ladies and even men wont eat something that looks and acts like they do.. The circumstances have to be either extreme, i.e. starvation survival, or cultural as with cannibal tribes and/or legendary Giants in fables.. So, this is how that strange dynamic came about in this story as many of mine don't even touch vore on account of the above reasons I've given.
I figured a Steam Punk world too because I haven't seen it tried in this community ever! And I've read just about all of them. With a alternative technology I figure I'll be able to come up with a lot of doozies. ;)
Thank you very much for the thoughtful review Pixis. :)