Well this is really getting interesting, the way you build up Rachielle I was really expecting her to be unlikable and abusive but it seems at least she's attempting to turn over a new leaf for the sake of winning Rembrant's heart. She certainly seemed to do it through any method though. I like the way you've portarayed 3 different characters so far who all want to fuck Rembrant but go about it in 3 totally different ways. Jericho was a simple rapist, Crystal has a more gentle nurturing approach despite her delinquent personality but gets him to give head regardless, and Rachielle wants to totally own every aspect of him. 

Rachielles world of wealth comfort and protection is one it would be difficult for anyone not to get entranced by. Which I think shows Rembrant's greatest strength is his willpower not to give up his individuality and not give up his anal virginity. Despite the glorious sex in this story the actual romance and intrigue has been a suprisingly fun ride. Also I'm not usually into Futa/m but he's basically a trap so it kinda works for me on a new level lol.