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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Prize

I think the formatting went arwy in this chapter, making it a little hard to follow. Overall though, it was enjoyable enough. The following line was curious:

“And I’m not letting you die because you’re stubborn!” She snapped back. “It’s the law!”

What's the law? Will this be explained? How could he die? So many questions!



Author's Response:

I'll look into trying to refine it a little. The law refers specifically to the car seat in Velvette's Jaguar. Velvette like most people in this world is around ten feet tall. The car she drives is literally too big for Rembrandt to ride in safely. Technically it's not (he's barely tall enough) but she likes arguing with him about it as another way of babying and humiliating him. I'll clarify that better too.

Thanks for the review.

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