Reviews For Monica's shoes
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2008 5:46 PM Title: Throwing a knuckle ball

Good story. I just wish that there was more. At less than 1,000 words per part, this story is progressing a little bit at a time.
But keep it coming - more detail descriptions...

Author's Response: I'm making the next chapters longer, it seems that is a common request. Description is a must, I felt that I did a good job in the first chapter but have since grown lazy; it'll happen.

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