Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Gods

well, I'm officially jealous. this is the very stuff that I love to write, so it's a rare pleasure to be able to read it without having to do any of the hard work. even still, I wish I had written this story. I love the premise. very much looking forward to where you take it. marvelous chapter.

Author's Response:

Really kind words. Thank you.

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Visitors

I'm really enjoying everything about this story. how dominant heather is, and how she's starting to treat ben more like a pet, and disregard his feelings where they conflict with hers. I'm very curious how jason will interact with ben, too. the idea of him watching ben is very exciting. that ben's overall expected size has been reduced - and that it could be permanent - is also very inspiring. I also really like the juxtaposition of heather and jason's beliefs next to ben's, and how they seem to have more in common.

really love it. great pace, great characters!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Some of that psychology I hope to more fully flesh out. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2019 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Visitors

Great work, and very happy to see Ben's shrinking now falling well below 1 inch.  Since his minimum height estimate has been significantly reduced, can Heather's max height when she grows go up significantly?  It would be fun to see her grow well beyond the expectations or control of the study!  I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

Heh, very good question. Without giving away too much I'll just say there are surprises planned along the way :)

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2019 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

Great story idea and cool characters, looking forward to seeing where it goes.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: aknouh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

great story!!!

I wanted to make a great potential joke...but someone beat me to it!!!

 

hope to see more soon!!!

Reviewer: randomizetheplot Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2019 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

It’s like you scraped this premise straight off my brainpan. Love the characters so far. So looking forward to more of this.

Reviewer: Mcfuzzy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2019 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

I have been browsing this site for 9 years and I just made a account just to give you a review. (That alone should say a lot)

You're off to a great start this story has A LOT of potential. Ive been wanting a story with this premice for a long time. (If only I was as motived as you lol) Do keep it up, Dont let this be another one of those one chapter wonders.

Author's Response:

Wow. That's a wonderful compliment. Hope I don't disappoint. I intend to finish this one but not sure how many other stories I'll have time to write subsequent to this one. Hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: Ecstacy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2019 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Odds

Promising start. I like that Heather seems all for the treatment, while Ben is more apprehensive about it. Then the possible strain it may put on the relationship if one of them was compitable and the other wasn't makes me interested in how things will transpire.