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Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 27 2019 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed a male action and sex scene. Though the "inside" ball ideas I didnt like so much because thats not how it works, haha. But still good story.



Author's Response:

hm, yeah, i had to take a few liberties around the actual biological aspects, but i did try to incorporate more accuracies than not. I’m sorry it didn’t quite do it for you. I’m glad other parts were worth the read. Thanks!

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