Date: October 04 2020 2:59 AM Title: Act 3 (Final): Bursting Emotions!
I have my rating as a 10 so I can balance out the overall rating better, because my real rating for this is probably around 8 or 9 and I don't think it deserves the low rating it has right now. Pretty good stuff, just definitely needs some proofreading to fix grammatical mistakes and a little bit more backstory to flesh out the characters.
Date: February 26 2019 9:18 AM Title: Act 1: A Chance Encounter?
Sorry didnt mean to rate it that low
That's fine. If you can't change it then that's okay. But also next time please be more careful. Also I would like to hear your thoughts on this rather than just saying the stars are an accident....
Date: February 26 2019 9:05 AM Title: Act 2: Quality Time...?
Its ok so far, i would definitely be careful with how the dialogue is set up, because i have seen people do this before and their story reads like a bad middle school play, but it seems to be ok so far.
Hmm....I'll be sure to keep that in mind with my stories in the future. Also it's kinda strange that you rated this Act even lower than the first one....