Reviews For A Hint of Sugar
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Reviewer: littless Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 14 2019 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like the premise of someone shrinking just because they WANT to. And being able to take pills to do it, well I can think of all sorts of games that lovers -- and enemies -- coud play. I'll think be going to drug store real soon to get some 'Aspirn' and 'Baby Aspirin' . ;)

I admit that I was taken by surprise in the last chapter when Laura shrunk but she seems to have made up for it now. And now that she's big I can only wonder what punishment she's going to dish out. I'd also like to find out what would happen if the relative sizes were the other way around?



Author's Response: I think those are some pretty insightful questions and observations. Those are things I want readers to be thinking about, so it’s gratifying to hear. I wonder if Laura shrinking put some people off? It’s all a chocolate-and-peanut-butter situation for me, but I could see not everyone feeling that way. Just curious, I noticed you rated this one 4.5 stars. Can you think of anything that could’ve been different in the story that would’ve made you want to rate it a 5?

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