Date: May 25 2019 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great additions! I like how you’ve set him up to disobey. I sense his punishment is going to stink. Literally. I hope the stink from Beth’s feet so overwhelm him that it makes him involuntarily orgasm. Lol. You’re doing a great job. Hell, seeing him used as a sex toy will be fun, too!
Thanks very much! I wanted an escape attempt but also wanted to convey the idea that Beth is always in control and John doesn't really have a hope of outsmarting her. I'll be updating in a few days, but real life stuff is getting in the way for the moment. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: May 18 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice addition! Please don’t lose interest in this story. There is so much that Beth can and should do to him sexually and everything else. You have a lot of people who appreciate the time and dedication you’ve already shown this wonderful story.
Thank you for the compliment! I'm definitely going to finish this story and have a rough plan made out, I just don't know exactly how to do it yet. He will get smaller though and everything will become more overwhelming for him. I've just added 2 more chapters so let me know what you think!
Date: May 17 2019 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this, especially the use of her Nylons, hope there are more. Love to have him under her hose covered feet. Anyhow great story keep it up and look foreword wto reading more! Let the imagination lose!
Thank you! I'll bring in nylons further down the line but probably in about 2 chapters. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: May 11 2019 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the compliment about my old story. Much appreciated. Great to hear that you have a chapter that deals with the soul-destroying stink of Beth’s feet. But Duck is right- this is your story and I know it’ll continue being great no matter what. I’ve just always liked the contrast of a beautiful woman who’s feet can smell. This is especially so for a super tiny person. I’m not into male giants but a guy named Smutmegzillo on Devianart wrote a story called Smaller than Ever that has stuck with me. A guy is increasingly shrunk and scrunched under a friend’s toes. The descriptions of what the stink and heat do to him as he keeps dwindling is so overwhelming and degrading. It’s like he was being chewed up and ripped apart by smell alone. I’d love to see Beth shrink him down to like that and see what the smell does to him as she just chills. Lol. Keep up the great work. And check out that story for possible inspiration.
Date: May 10 2019 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just got around to catching up with this story, glad you've provided frequent updates!
Stop worrying about ruining the story man, you're doing a great job. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
(I also like the suggestion that Jay made, love stinky stuff. However if that's not the direction you want to go in, don't force it. Just write the story that you want to write and I'm sure it'll turn out to be fantastic.)
Thanks a lot, I didn't expect such a positive response so it was pretty shocking to me and didn't want to disappoint. Thanks for the advice though, I'll have a chapter like Jay suggested coming up but I'm not sure when yet
Date: May 10 2019 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far. Excellent writing and you really portray Beth as playfully dominant. I know a Beth that I imagine being tiny and at the feet of. I’d love for him really tiny at one point and scrunched deeply under the toe crevices of one of her feet. Really just pound her stink into him while she sits and relaxes. Let him be nearly chewed up by the stink as a way of kind of breaking him. I think Beth needs to love him but also just soil and sully him in her odor as a way of showing ownership of him.
Thanks very much, your story 'A Son's Demise' is one of my favourite stories on here so I'm delighted you like mine! I have a chapter like that in mind but it probably won't be the main focus of the story. Hope you enjoy it anyway!
Date: May 08 2019 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please, please, please, please, please keep this going. I haven't felt the need to log into my account in so long but this story alone made me want to, just so I could tell you I'm LOVING this story.
Thank you so much! It's my first time writing so it's hard for me to tell if it's any good without feedback, I really appreciate that and I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'll be adding another chapter in the next few days
Date: May 03 2019 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first part! Big fan of the premise, Aunt Beth will be a treat to see in action.
In terms of criticising things I'm not the best, nothing really jumps at at me when reading so no problems so far, keep it up!
Thank you so much! I really like your work so that's great to hear. I've just put up a new chapter so I hope it doesn't disappoint.