Reviewer: Stepbonk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2019 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Icing on the Cake

Wow another amazing chapter! First off that's one helluva sexy dream to start things off, and I really hope Olivia eventually figures out how to cause some "serious trouble". A lot of interesting issues get raised and I'm dying to know how they're ultimately resolved, but I'm also happy to see you taking your time and building up the story.

 

It's neat to think that Olivia and her coworkers are now basically now immunized from ever shrinking small- that already in itself makes them superior to the poor un-enlarged masses. But why would someone get stuck in a given size state if they maintain it too long? Do the macro/micro particles dissipate over time if left activated, and leave the remaining matter permanently altered? Or do some of the particles simply become activated full-time?

 

I'm imagining Olivia and the other girls using the E-Reactor like a tanning salon over time and their overall size limits rising exponentially with every use, going out in public as amazons to flirt with the littles while they fantasize about growing taller than hills, skyscrapers and mountains with the mere push of a button and the patience to wait for the expansion to kick in. Or she could toy with a bunch of people down by her feet and spend hours on end bombarding them with micro particles while they beg her for mercy.

 

Can't wait to see how Jack deals with the roommates! I'm hoping he does indeed get his clothing back for a bit because I think it's hot when giant women let people wearing clothes and shoes perve all over their bodies and feet, insecure at first but feeling more and more confident as their power grows; I guess it's up to the ladies. If I were writing it, I'd let them shrink him slowly and build up their confidence as he rubs their feet and feels their toes getting bigger and bigger in his mouth, while they probe him about all the crazy things they could do if they only knew what he does.

Author's Response:

I don't want to say too much yet regarding your questions about how someone might get stuck at a certain size. The question will be answered in time within the story. 

I do like the tanning salon analogy, but no comment as to how things will play out. 

The story will likely be on hiatus for a week, but I'll try to sneak a chapter or two in as time allows. Thanks for reading