Date: July 15 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
FFFUUUUCCCKKKKK. I have read many many many stories on this site over the years. A lot of them aren’t even on the site anymore. This story . . . . . . . . . . . . . . More specifically this chapter hit me really hard. It was so intense I almost cried and that’s not easy to do. I’m so hooked on this story I’m literally checking almost every hour for the next chapter. Great job!!!!!!!
Date: July 15 2019 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
There needs to be more paragraph breaks and when a character talks that begins a new paragraph
[Report This]Date: July 15 2019 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Holy shit this is intense. And I love it. Great story so far.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2019 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
This easily the most heart-wrenching chapters of this story so far. This feels like Caleb is at his absolute lowest... so that means it can only go up from here hehe (i hope) anyway can Rachel and Audrey ever make it up to Caleb, will Caleb ever come to realize that he is loved, I look forward to finding out it the future.
Date: July 15 2019 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter expanding more on Caleb's past adding even more to the fuel. Everyone that did Caleb wrong being more guilt ridden by being forgiven but made aware that he will never trust another soul, find love or happiness ever again. Hope they suffer even more since they couldnt even be bothered to look into the crime like Caleb said.
Reminds me of another story I enjoy on this site, its all about trust and what happens when they break it.
Havent been hooked liked this in awhile keep up the great work.