Date: April 27 2020 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
One of the best stories in this site. Your deep thinking is really enjoyable. Thank you for this story. please, please continue!
Date: July 25 2019 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was an interesting chapter. You had me going for awhile. I was like “Oh Shit she really fucked up now.” Then the twist. I’m not a fan of the whole extensive fantasy that turns out to not be happening but you did it well. Again I’m so hooked I’m literally checking every hour for updates lol. But I know this is going backwards I really want to know how Allison died and what exactly happened when she turned herself in.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2019 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have been enjoying the story so far, It reminds me of the story Omega: Inheritance. Another story were in a normal sized person that was adopted by a family of Giantesses but who's closes ties don't seem to matter when she is framed for a crime she did not commit and her "sister" is in charage of her punishment.
Another common thread is that I wish there was more justice against the giantesses. In that story and yours, but then again I am most likely more vindictive than most people.
To me when you love someone you give them a beneifit of a doubt if they say they are innocennt. Espeically if you grew up with them. If they do something that seems so out character how can you not at least have some doubt of their guilt. To at least investigate their verison of the story on your own before disowning them. Don't they deserve at least that much?
In that way I find the Giantesses in your story and in Omega more cruel than those that Rampage and wipe out whole cities. Their Victims are strangers or heck even rivals, but the victims in your story and in Jack's were suppose to be family and loved ones. But look how quickly they turned on them.
Any way, thank you for the time and effort to write and share your work.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2019 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Woah I was wondering how you were going to reintroduce fetish material back to this story and I was not disappointed, that being said it was really jarring to see that she has fantasys of eating humans after everything shes been through. Although I'm not sure if she still has the feeling given how they ended and coming to realize that that's how Caleb sees her. I'm hoping that she can nip this in the bud before it can escelate out of control. I'm also glad to see some progress with Caleb regarding meeting Audrey even if they couldnt comunicate in anyway. Another great chapter good job!
Date: July 25 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Please let this end good. This chapter had me going there,man. Although, excellent work with rachel’s Guilt about eating Miranda. That guilt she’s feeling makes the her more appalling as a character. You know how to create a good sad atmosphere!