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Reviewer: Giga_planet_eater Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2019 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd love to see a chapter or two dedicated to the power trips the mom or aunt get by having thousands or more tinies inside them.



Author's Response:

I was about to, then two things happened that delayed me in doing so. 

First, I wanted to see what animal transformation most people would want, even though I pretty much had that part of the story figured out, or so I thought.

Second, when I received no suggestions on the animal transformation, I was simply setting out the baseline for the transformation when an idea struck me, a joke actually.  I hope everyone gets a kick out of the joke.  I know Cindy's Aunt Susan will enjoy it, in a fashion that you might like I may add.

Thank you for the reply.

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2019 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's very good. I'd love to read more

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Incredible, interesting concept.

Reviewer: Giga_planet_eater Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2019 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is amazing. Please continue.

I can't wait to see where this can go.

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