Date: July 01 2020 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is an incredible story. I would love to see more of it.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2019 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm. I love the concept and the use of the mom and the aunt. I like Cindy’s interest and how knowledgeable her mom is. It makes the conversations fun to read.
Susan is my favorite character in this story. I love her confidence and how she is in control of everything in her life. Being a slave to her probably means no escape since she probably knows how to keep her tinies trapped inside her.
While the thought of thousands of tinies stuck inside them sounds hot, I think I prefer a more intimate approach with just one tiny stuck inside. That way we can relate to that tiny. Cindy’s butt boy is a perfect example. Someone that we can be envious of. Would love to see Susan and the aunt have a favorite slave. (Maybe it’s the panty slave? I wish I was that guy.)
I also wrote a review on your “Tomgirl” story which I still think is your best story in my opinion. Would love to see that story continue. That next chapter might be my favorite of that tale.
Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, nice to hear from you.
A couple of things. I had nothing to do the other night so I had a bunch of beers and shots, then wound up writing this. You can probably tell by all the gramatical mistakes. In essence this particular story is just an ongoing drinking game for me.
I was going to have them each with only a few tinies, but as you shall see as the story goes along the women are ageless, so a natural accumulation is occuring. Will they keep their tinies? Will they sell some off? Will they just transform them into objects other women can use? Will a mass prayer session happen between one of their legs? {he he, you bet}
As to my other stories, both "Tomgirl" and "French Weave" are still active, as has been my schedule, hence the lack of time to simply write them out. "Tomgirl" is fun to write, whereas "French Weave" is in my opinion the better, more straightforward concept {though with only one chapter written and probably only one chapter to go, no one could tell that}.
Truth is I have several stories in the works, "Tinies For Sale" has a few chapters posted. "Succubus Dominatrix", "Goth Pet Dog", "The Company", "Lady ? and Chastity Girl" {still working on the name for that one}, "Learning To Fly" are among possible future posts; and my creme de la creme "Battle Butt Babes" {I think is pretty darn decent}.
Thanks for the review, always great to hear from you. Oh yeah, if you like the mother in "Tomgirl", you'll definitely like the night that is about to happen in her bedroom.