[Report This]Date: July 23 2019 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh Wow, that entire scene was incredibly amazing! Just a short space of time, as it was (in reality) - it would have quickly played out, but wow! The simple act of Rachels thoughtless stroll across her office... the glass castle of her desk - her collosal feet moving about like two earth-movers as she casually tapped her toe...
I could easily imagine the shock of intensity after Sam hung-up his phone and slipped it back into his pocket - her eyes seaching him out, then suddenly falling onto him..
Her hand wrapping around him YES! I love this Jack! Lol!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
This story definitely takes a slower pace, especially in those kinds of moments, but will hopefully still feel action-packed.
Date: July 23 2019 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome stuff so far, really looking forward to this one I'm hoping he's trapped in that heel with her feet at some point. Would be a fine punishment for him
Author's Response:
We will indeed see some in-shoe material later on.