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Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2020 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Holy crap! I knew it!  Rachel's Stockings... YES!

 Nice visual discriptions. Makes the reading like watching it on video. I'td be so thrilling to actually see this happening to the poor guy... but I guess, in this case, he really deserves It! Lol!



Author's Response:

This story is definitely paced in a lot of ways to feel like real-time, so I'm glad that's coming across. Thanks for reading.

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