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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2022 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 47

Pure gold

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 47

Damn it....seriously Desmond and to a lesser extent, Audrey need justice.

But the deck seems stacked against them, Jackie seems untouchable.

But damn! despite her allure and sexyness Jackie really needs to get some comeuppance XD

20 years...and she's only ever thrived...

Hopefully this is setting her up for an epic fall (and desmond gets his height back...and hopefully Jackie loses everything, height included XD)

Loved the Audrey and Desmond interaction in this chapter (aside from her insecurity moments/jealousy) but loved when she was demanding to see Jackie.

Can't wait to read more :)

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