Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2023 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 52

Excellent chapter! 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2023 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 52

Well this chapter was exactly what it said on the tin.

It was long, and it had a looot of insertion.

I have to say in terms of the sexual content with Audrey you did amazing work here, the dynamic of the younger tiny and the older experienced Audrey just taking control was written so well and her using him in that aspect. 

However on the other emotional aspect.....Ow....Just ....Ow.

The way Audrey and Desmond's family have reacted, and how Audrey has just given up on him/believed Jackie.....

I have to hold on to hope that Audrey and Desmond will reunite and the truth will come out.

Jackie needs to be brought to justice for everything she's done. 

Author's Response:

Thanks, Vegetaboy! I like to deliver on what I promised, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

You'll get a clearer look at what Desmond is up to next chapter. My plan is to alternate perspectives from Audrey to Desmond for a few more chapters, then close out the novel. The end is near, my friend.