Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26 2021 8:57 AM Title: Part I

Will you be updating this story soon?

Reviewer: Concordant Opposition Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2019 1:49 AM Title: Part I

I've been enjoying this story a lot. The prose is excellent, capturing both the realities of extreme size difference as well as the emotions of the characters without getting bogged down in complex description or exposition.

You've done a great job with the characters as well. Very willing or obsessive tinies that have the size fetish themselves are a bit of a cliche, but Sierra is a genuine and sympathetic character. Your skill in conveying her obsession is a large part of this. However, the choice to focus on Sierra's fascination with Duval in terms of pure size and power instead of in terms of the size and power of her feet/breasts/butt/etc is interesting and in my opinion effective. Her desire to seek even the barest platonic attention from the towering scientist seems a realistic reaction to the desire she's experiencing, which comes from emotion as much as physical lust. The glove scene also adds to this theme, as a disposable lab glove is not high on the list of female attire that one might be aroused by, but for Sierra it works nonetheless.

The overseer is also a well executed character. It's clear that she is a kind and responsible woman, but she is not the idealized angelic, maternal savior that features in many gentle giantess stories. She is a more down-to-earth character and all the more nuanced for it. I'm excited to see how her relationship with Sierra develops as the story goes on.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 1:40 AM Title: Part I

Outstanding. Pace is leaving me anticipating a lot. Will be interesting how you lead into some things. Can't wait.

Reviewer: Saf Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2019 2:27 AM Title: Part I

Very cute. Eager to see more! :)