Thank you for writing this gentle and kind story. A very welcome change.
I think this type of story is my favorite genre, that being a tiny community of willing participants being shrunken and cared for/overseen by an attractive mature woman. Also their size and the fact that they have normal amenities in this community adds to my personal preferences and frankly everything else is just gravy.
I too would like to see you continue the story of these characters but I'm just glad you wrote what you did.

aaron
PS IF you decide to continue I think giving her office a power outage would be a neat experience just for us(the readers) to see how the community and Duvall would react, cause maybe it could get hotter than normal in their tank(or whatever it is) and would get very humid. So perhaps she would have to take a vote with them on what to do and maybe her apartment/house? However, if you chose to continue I'd mainly like to see Duvall's character developed more.
Again thanks for writing and please don't take offense to my suggestion because that was not my intent.