Date: August 13 2019 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
When I saw your description I thought I had to read this. It wasn't bad, at most I'd say there were a few points where you got almost unneccessarily descriptive in a way that felt more like rehashing what you'd already described rather than adding new elements. But it's hard to pinpoint exactly where this happened. Otherwise the descriptions were very good as always.
I did think it was funny how you revealed at the end that there was a girl there the whole time that got left behind, basically trolling the people who think male giants are "wrong" somehow. Teasing them that, yes, there was a girl there, but she didn't do anything. The story also seemed purposefully uninteractive which was surprising at first. I thought from your description you might go the other way and show that you can have interaction but it seems you went the way of "interaction doesn't matter all the time or to everyone" which was interesting. Overall it wasn't a bad piece and I think its generally one of the best male giant things that I've seen. Largely thanks to your descriptive style and pacing