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Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2019 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 8-17-19

So now he’s been caught and his plan is to shrink again, I love it haha. I can’t wait to see what his idea of impressing his sister will be, great chapter and story.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting.  He wants the bikini pic so much he'll do anything.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2019 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 4 ... 8-17-19

I'm really enjoying the suspense build up and love the fact that she talks about how tiny he is and how gigantic she must look. Size descriptions are great! Maybe down the line the shrink ray can have the setting changed to grow her? Still hoping for footplay and can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting!  I'm glad you like the suspense of it, and the size descriptions.  I'd probably not do growth... maybe in a different story.  Thanks for reading.

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