Date: October 19 2019 1:02 PM Title: Ashley and Coach
I love the blowjob vore.
Also I wana ask, could you continue or write a story similar to a story called tongue ring on this site? I'd be willing to pay you to continue it, or rewrite it if u have too.
Plz let me know
Hey! Send me a message about this, I just started doing commissions and I'd love to talk to you about this story!
Date: August 29 2019 12:57 AM Title: Ashley and Coach
The bit of worldbuilding works great. You showed it through the actions of others and the multiple Ashleys.
I love the casual behavior of the giants/giantess and how it brings doom and terror to the Ashleys
Date: August 26 2019 8:18 PM Title: Ashley and Coach
I don’t mean this in a negative way, but we don’t care too much about the world-building as much, at peast when it’s not highly relevant to the plot. I think in this case you have enough of a foundation that the story flows well, even though its not super detailed and defined.
Another great start to a story though!