[Report This]Date: September 17 2021 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 21: (Part 1) Curiosity
Once again, Weeb, this is such an awesome chapter! Which... might mark the beginning of some sort of Makoto redemption arc, huh? So it seems, at the very least. Furyu doesn't necessarily agree with this, and I guess I can kind of understand her—though this is what makes Megumi special and better than most people in the end: that is, her ability to see that drop of good will in every person, which is always there but that not everyone is always able to enjoy or appreciate. Makoto is understandably reluctant, but I'm sure her personality will soften with time as she spends more and more time with Megumi. But what truly surprises me is the ending: that's a new character, right? Or, well... I'm pretty sure I've heard this name before (most likely outside of this story—that is, directly from you), but I don't think she has appeared in the previous chapters. If that's so, then I really can't wait to see her in action!
For what concerns the writing style, it's awesome as always: you're definitely someone who knows tens of thousands of words, as that test showed~ I've also noticed that everyone in this story seems to be plus-sized, not just Megumi (less-than-modest bosom, e-ehm), and I also liked how you briefly touched on Rentaro's inner conflict when it comes to shoes, but you rightfully portrayed him as a decent person who won't do weird stuff to Furyu without her consent. The characters' personalities are very well represented too, and you can tell Furyu's, Megumi's and Makoto's lines apart very easily.
So, all in all, this chapter also gets a 10 from me: and now I'm totally looking forward to part two: I can't wait to see what role this Ichika will play in the story!