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Reviewer: gpber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2020 9:08 AM Title: Day 1

I really enjoyed the 1st part, but I'm REALLY enjoying the 2nd part! Very excited that there will even be a 3rd part where he's even smaller. One and a half feet tall?

Will there be a 4th part where he's even smaller than that? Considering the content of your story, it would be really interesting if Reese was only as tall as his sister's feet. Or even just a little smaller so he has to look up to her toes! :)

Author's Response:

nah i think imma stop at 3 versions. i need to be able to keep adding on to the story and after 3 it would get too much for me to handle. but there will be under 1 foot tall in my other one

Reviewer: Horace Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2020 3:36 AM Title: Day 1

Well this is the first time in a while I've binged a story in one night 😅. This is a very specific type to domination that I'm living for, and would love to see more of. I'm not gonna try to explain it but fans of it know what I mean. Love Olivia, can't wait for more butt stuff with her! I think it's the essence of Olivia gas lighting Reese when he thinks something is off, it's so authoritative and patronizing. Mwah. Beautiful. That theme but in the context of butt worship? I just... can't wait 🤣 Thanks so much for adding your talent and voice to the community my friend, it's very fresh and welcome. Good luck!

Author's Response:

thank you, glad to have you as a fan!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2020 12:43 PM Title: Day 1

Im excited to see the newest "version" of the story and how his smaller size will change the interactions he has with the world. Thanks for pumping out chapters so quickly. 

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Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 8:35 PM Title: Day 1

Fantastic story, thanks for posting. :)

It's been a while since I've waited for updates so eagerly, and after reading all 3 parts of Day 23 I'm glad I kept following along.

As much as I was hoping for an ending where Reese failed and was stuck with being a servant to his sister, her friends, and their mom, this ending was perfectly in tone with the rest of the story and I'm not sure if it could have been done better.

Excited to see future stories from you. I'll have to check out the daughter/dad one soon. Will future spiritual sequels feature a similar amount, if not more, foot content? It would be wonderful to see Reese under Olivia's feet whilst they're stinky hehe, in the rewrite you've mentioned in other replies.

Author's Response:

thank you! last few chapters were definitely a nice treat for anyone who loyally followed along, and yes, while a stuck servant idea mightve been nice i dont think it wouldve worked. and its the last chapter so whats the difference anyways :P

the rewrite of brother has more foot content but since her boobs and butt are big too i'm trying to make it a bit more evened out. but dad/daughter will have more foot content tho imo, idk if any of my stories will ever just be one thing.

btw i loved your beneath the bullies story :)

Reviewer: Cuchulain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 8:32 PM Title: Day 1

This story needs to go on hold until we get a few more chapters in how to train your father, 😆 🤣 😂 

Author's Response:

i understand how you feel! but this one is only a few chapters from the end, so i wanted to rush to finish this one first while still updating the father one every sunday. otherwise i'd have two stories that wont be finished for several more months if i gave them equal attention :P 

Reviewer: Underman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2020 5:49 PM Title: Day 1

This series is definitely one of the best ones I've ever read. So many fetish writers jump right into the action with little to no context, which completely takes away the thrill and the eroticism. You manage to make the relationship between the two ever more sexual and alluring without making the story feel unrealistic. You are very gifted and I wish I could write as well as you do! The only small criticism I have is that when your story arrives at a climax (like rubbing her feet, doing her nails, etc.), the day tends to end without describing that situation in more detail.

I really hope you will continue this series. I will probably be checking daily. I also read the first chapter of your new story "How to Train your Father in 23 Days or Less" which I also can't wait to be continued :-)

Author's Response:

good point! i dont feel good at writing descriptions, like theres only so many words and phrases i can use so many times before i feel like im being repetitive. thats probably why the climaxes feel like that. but you have a good point, thanks for the feedback, hopefully i can improve in the future!

Reviewer: Jessajess99 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2020 3:47 AM Title: Day 1

i accidentally deleted a review from D W that was meant to be a reply, but they said something about it being a slow taunt/slow tease so i say... good 😏 it's a big long humiliation/unaware teasing story

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2020 7:23 AM Title: Day 1

Love this story so much its one of the best gentle starts to one of these stories ive seen so looking forward to the rest!!

Author's Response:

thanks :)

Reviewer: Ess-rets Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2020 10:32 PM Title: Day 1

I just discover your story with the new chapter, that is so good ! I love their relationship, the 'soft femdom' in a way, I hope you will continue. 

Author's Response:

i also hope i'll continue lol

Reviewer: jimmyjimmy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2019 7:59 PM Title: Day 1

I'm enjoying the buildup and slow burn.  Hope to see more.

Author's Response:

another slow burn fan you love to see it :)

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 3:40 PM Title: Day 1

Big sister small brother? Yes yes yes! Personally hoping for foot and odour domination, but I'm sure whatever form of domination you choose will be great.

From your summary, this sounds like it'll be very interesting and unique. Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

Feet should come into the story very casually and briefly on day 5. Rubbing and smelling will be a big thing week 2 and by weeks 3 and 4 he'll be doing a lot more for her than most normal brothers do for their sisters :P

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 5:35 AM Title: Day 1

Loving it so far ! I'm really interested of what's to come, his descent into submission and his sister's way toward domination :D

Keep it up !

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Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 4:43 PM Title: Day 1

Exploring the setting from different starring points is nifty! Looking forward to see the different choices made across the parallel adventures. =)

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

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