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Reviewer: johnbart37 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2020 2:18 PM Title: Day 5

God, how did I not find this story earlier??? This has been the slow burn I've been looking for.

The way the sister manipulates her brother is so freakin hot. I like how she barely even needs to lift a finger. She just appeals to his new craving to be "nice" and he does whatever she asks. Such a brilliant dynamic! And I'm sure it'll soon go beyond him just making coffee and pulling the ottoman over for her.

Author's Response:

lol yeah version 1 was pretty slow cuz i was like really adamant about it being 23 days long for some reason but definitely better by the second half and v2 picks up even faster. thanks for the review and ive read and like your jackie story!

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