Date: January 18 2021 11:33 PM Title: Day 11
Aha! Chap 12, Day 11 and a turn of events. I thought this was going to be like a subconcious, or perhaps conscious yet surreptitious operant conditioning on Olivia's part, but there's more coming and I can't wait. I told you I was impatient.
BTW, I always seem to forget the rating whenever I comment. I'm giving it a 10 (or 5 stars or whatever) so far, but if I forget please understand, I don't mean to give it a zero.
i have no idea what conscious yet surreptitious operant conditioning means LOL but thanks, 11th day is definitely a turning point in the story. thanks for sticking with it!
Date: July 24 2020 3:10 PM Title: Day 11
I love this story but I'm wishing there was a little more noticing of the sisters big breasts plz
i think i had a fair amount of that in the beginning but yeah its tapered off. just him noticing how big she is in general has sorta died down. it's still a size story and obviously a size site so i'll try to mention more again, thanks for mentioning
Date: July 23 2020 5:12 AM Title: Day 11
Been eagerly awaiting this chapter and it lived up to the hype for me! Reese has embraced his changing relationship with Olivia and I'm immensely curious to see how private they choose to keep it or if her new role as mentor eventually results in the whole family acknowledging their new happy dynamic. As I also a sucker for a happy ending, hopefully Olivia's benevolent guidance ultimately betters Reese as much as it lowers him :p
The chapter note mentioned that, as so many popular writers and stories can attest to, there truly is no pleasing everyone at once. But, even more content is a more than acceptable substitute!
well done and happily awaiting your future work, including this story and its continuations!
thank you for the feedback :) interesting to hear of someone awaiting this chapter since i didn't mention 11 would be an important one - but i guess as it is about the midpoint, some kind of major change is to be expected. good eye, and thanks for reading!
Date: July 23 2020 1:39 AM Title: Day 11
I kind of like this honestly.
Olivia seems kind of devious at times but really she seems to genuinely care for her brother and he seems to be a closet sub who enjoys his time with her.
100% lol u almost exactly nailed it. definitely trying to paint her as a considerate person who genuinely loves her brother, but is also a little (unawarely) fun/pushy. he's definitely a closet sub, and im not sure if ill ever even make him realize it haha