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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 4:35 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3

Jordan is a wonderful brat.


Also with that ending it kind of makes me think there's more to those words than just that night.

Author's Response:

i guess the ending is open to interpretation!

Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2020 11:51 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3

This was a really good story. Loved the characters and their interactions with each other. Towards the end I though Jordan was going to sit on Reese but she was just teasing him about his sister. I cant wait for the version where he shrinks really small and see how different it goes for him. I hope he ends up small enough to get lost on his sister's thong ;)

Author's Response:

oh dont worry, he'll be sat on next version, and there'll be a MUCH more interesting thong interaction even though he won't be super tiny yet :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2020 3:20 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3

So we need a sequel now. 

Reece ends up still failing, which leads to him having to retake his senior year and another year of servitude for Olivia. 

Would also like a spinoff series featuring more torture from jordan

Author's Response:

hahaha ill take that to mean you liked it. ngl i DID think about making a sequel series but i'd rather just rewrite it with him being even smaller but add a bunch of totally new scenes, and since he shrunk "naturally" isntead of something sci-fi-ish like a size ray, i wouldnt be able to make him shrink again anyways without a rewrite cuz im too much of a stickler for a nice consistent story canon to suddenly change everything up. 

but dont worry, the point is, more reese/olivia action is coming plus more jordan and some new characters :)

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