Date: May 08 2021 11:32 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
Pretty great chapter as always Jess! And I'm glad you're getting so many commisions. Your writting is my favorite right now on this entire "fandon". You really deserve it! If the currency from where I Iive were not so undervalued in relation to the dollar I would be making a lot of comissions aswell 🤣😭😭.
But anyway, congrats for the sucess! d84;
Date: December 18 2020 5:37 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
For V2 Day 7 Pt 3
So humiliating and I love it. Ahhh! Reese is so lucky to be stuck on his sister's sweaty body. I hope she smells too, it was after gym after all. I sometimes think Olivia is really into her brother, she just doesnt want o admit it.
Thank you for another hot and awesome chapter
yeah she was supposed to be sweating bc of the gym of course but i guess i didnt mention it that much... but thanks for the review!
Date: November 06 2020 8:13 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
Loving this version of the story with all the nice little details added compared to the first version! Your latest chapter was great with the added foot massage scene with the mom! Was that a hint hint to a spin-off of this story? How to Train Your Son has a nice ring to it! Any way keep up the great work!
nah i just wanted to add some new characters, if i do a How to Train Your Son itll be with whole new people. but thanks for the reivew!
Date: October 28 2020 9:25 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents
Typically I prefer fast-paced stories mostly because these fantasies revolve heavily around being quick and straight to the action. Then some people try to do slow-paced stories and to me they just don't seem to work out that well. You on the other hand do a fantastic job of spacing events out perfectly to allow room for character development while keeping it spicy enough to keep readers intrigued. I very much enjoy how real you try to keep it too as that somehow adds more spice to it (in my opinion). I love that you're doing two more versions and I would be lying if I said I wasn't excited, but I still want to appreciate the first version as there aren't many stories like it.
I also want to mention that I love this story so much, I decided to actually make an account to submit a review. I've been on this site for years and never felt so inclined to share how great I believe a story is. This is one of my top three favorite stories if not number one. Thank you for your work!
Lastly I just want to throw in an idea and see if you might consider it. Somehow Reese gets given a wedgie whether given it intentionally or unintentionally. I got the idea from your latest chapter about his sister putting him into her romper. Because of their size difference, as he got shoved into the article of clothing he might get a wedgie as his legs get spread apart into the leg holes of the romper. Hopefully that makes sense, and if you choose to use it or not is fine with me because I already know that either way, I'll be pleased to see your future writing!
im pretty sure this is one of the best reviews i've ever received 😭
im so glad you like the pacing of the story and the character development, i understand the appeal of people wanting stuff fast and quick but to me, my favorite stories are always the slower ones, the ones where you can see the characters changing slowly, day by day. like stories where something super sexual happens on day one, its like, where do you go from there? how do they top that, you know? but longer, slower stuff its like, here's this good piece of food and then something that tastes better, and something even better, and then something even BETTER shkshks stupid analogy i know but yeah u seem to get it idk why i keep rambling
im super honored that u made an account just to review my story, idk if people go back and read the responses to review but im super super appreciative and i hope you know that reviews like this mean a lot to me and really encourage me to keep writing :)
ill try and think of a way of adding some kind of wedgy thing somewhere along the way just for how great this review was!