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Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2020 10:27 AM Title: Day 7, Part 2

Great addition. Loved the awkward situations he was out in and the humiliation his sister put him through



Author's Response:

the awkward bits are some of my personal favs as well!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2020 5:55 AM Title: Day 7, Part 2

Awww! No Olivia's feet this time? Jk but i really love that car scene tho. The domination adn humiliation is so perfect. I have to take breaks between paragraphs just to control my excitement. I'm surprised nothing awakened below Reese while his sister was grooving.

 

Another awesome chapter, Jess! Can't wait for more again.Thank you so much



Author's Response:

"I'm surprised nothing awakened below Reese while his sister was grooving."

yeah a few people have mentioned this but writing about that kinda stuff (from either perspective, big or little person) isnt my favorite way to write. i dont hate it or anything plenty of writers do that and i think its fine i just usually prefer it not to be like that. but one day i might make a story with that perspective. thanks for review :)

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