[Report This]Date: December 30 2019 9:08 PM Title: Fun for one
The story is not bad, I love the concept actually. You are pretty creative on how each chapter plays out.
My favorite chapter was the sex toy one because like the main character, it’s probably the one option you really want from this app. There was the clothing option, and a pair of panties may not be so bad especially if his face was facing her pussy.
Hmm, when you mentioned celebrities, I thought you meant actual celebrities. I never heard of any of these girls so when I read the options, I thought they were characters from a chapter that I must have skipped.
Also, these choices of girls seem very young. I looked up all of them, and while all of them are over 18, some still look childlike which makes me raise an eyebrow, you know.
Only Jessica and Bree look like women and not like little girls and from both of them, I like Bree Morgan the most.
Overall, a very interesting story, and I can’t wait for the next chapter! (Happy holidays!)
Author's Response:
I see your point, however i am the same age or younger than all of them. Plus this is only the first famous event, for online influencers to spread marketing to the youth. The next may be film stars or something.