Reviews For The TF app
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Reviewer: Laah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2020 10:17 AM Title: end of the line

This last chapter was a really good end! Wasn't expecting him to end this way but I liked it anyways.

Also, I liked the way he was given to Lydia, and wasn't expecting her to appear this last time too.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 26 2020 7:33 AM Title: end of the line

Really liked the Jessica chapter.  She really took advantage of the apps destructive ability.  Loved that her roomate had been a unknowing participant in her tyrany and murder.  Also how the naive teenage brother ended up becoming a permant sex toy for his sister.

Wish you had added a part at end about the brother missing and them finding the tf app on his phone and her wondering if he could have been one of her victims and then not really caring and laughing about it.  I think it could have fit well like that.

Noticed the story is finished now.  It was a fun ride.  Thanks for posting and hope to see more from you.



Author's Response:

this story may be finnished but im not, and the app is still available to download

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