Date: June 12 2021 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Unfortunately I'm not sure this story will continue. Authormadrigal16 wrote the 5 chapters a year and a half ago then has not returned to write more. I too want to find out what will happen next but the author lost interest or just couldn't continue. He did not even give names to wife and daughter yet. Premise great but author disappeared.
I hope he or she will return to give us more.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Wow! this is very interesting! Loving to be small around adult women is popular and has lots of stories. But, you have been very specific about John's fantassy which involvs his daughter but puts a fine line before it gets too awkward. I absolutely loved the part where John stands infront of the height chart and looks up at his daughter's height mark, his wish of having to stand on tip toes to kiss his little daughter, wearing her hand me downs, imagination of being even smaller and being able to sit on his daughter's lap .... very well detailing! Before it could get too awkward, it was very well managed!
This story at the moments is hanging at a very high note. I badly wish to see the continuation of this story! How will the father-daughter relation be when his wife and daughter returns? Will he be even smaller? What will happen when his daughter will grow? How the relationship will develop with his daughter's growing?
And - How did this specific fantassy developed in him? Was it from some incident from his childhood? What about his family beofore marriage? I mean parents, brothers, sisters, nieces ... etc.
Hell this can be like a psychological novel!
Date: April 24 2020 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
I still hope this is updated with more.The author hinted at what was to come.
Wondering: no mention is made of the names of John's wife and daughter.Why are they going to the airport and then presumably leaving the car in the airport parking lot for a week or so? Doesn't John need a car during his week or so to get to work (so he told them), or other things? Unless he works from home. And now he'll be too small to drive without raised pedals.
Now that he's three feet tall what's he going to do the next week or so--just stay home and await their arrival back? Does he continue to wear his daughter's clothes or somehow get boy sized shirts, pants, etc?
Date: March 02 2020 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
This is an incredible story, you've hit on a lot of great ideas, and in an area that is very unusual in many ways. Love it. Can't wait to see what happens next! Excellent work!!
Date: January 17 2020 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Good so far, want to see more.It will be interesting
if he's still like that when they return (so far names
not given of wife and daughter).He could get smaller too.
You had him resembling a 5 year old boy who somehow
went through puberty.Children have different body dimensions
than an adult who somehow shrank proportionally. If he shaves, etc, he could even pass for being a young girl or boy.
The shock the daughter would have of her daddy being smaller than her.
Might he become baby size or doll size?
As much as he'd like being small, he'd have to face problems of size and lack of strength.One of her high energy kid friends could shove him aside, even if just in spirited play.The advantages of being small exciting him would be worth it to him though.
And imagine if his wife and daughter come back, and he goes out for a walk--and gets kidnapped? The wife could put out an Amber Alert
for her abducted _husband_...
Date: December 20 2019 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Great story idea. You have set the story up well. Will he answer his wife with Yes Ma'am to show her proper respect. Will she treat him like the child he has become and spank him over her knee for any discipline?
Excellent start,
Diesel
Author's Response:
He's still mentally an adult. The wife's reaction and response to all of this... we just have to wait and see!
Date: December 18 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Home Alone
Humm... I like how you described John awkwardness towards his own heigh. It's not a fetish for tall womans, but a feeling of awkwardness in regards to his own body... very interesting and unique.
The title also got my attention. I like stories that pry deep into family affairs using the size as premise for change or discovery.
I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing. It's a good start :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I thought I'd take it for a more introspective spin. Of course, he's still very much a fetishist about some stuff (as you can probably tell), but it's fun exploring his thoughts and past experiences. Glad you enjoyed it so far!