Reviews For Food Wars: A new ingredient
Reviewer: io1908 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Taste tests
Date: December 23 2019 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 2: Taste tests
It's a great story, glad to see that such quality stuff around
Reviewer: carnage Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2019 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Taste tests
Author's Response:
Date: December 23 2019 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 2: Taste tests
Great story! Loving the idea of this. And the writing is very good. The description of her sucking on the tinies and eventually swallowing them in Chapter 2 is amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! I appreciate it, i'm always worried about my writing because English isn't my mother language.
I'm planning to improve on the descriptions in the future!